Mountain River

[larkspur]

Not sure if this composition works. What do you think?

[Dennis]

Larkspur very nice capture of the mountain river. Try this out for composition, see the white sky and just below that there is a patch of gray crop it just there, here is my reason. The way it is now your eyes continue right throught the image and up to the bright sky missing the best part of the image. With the crop to that gray area your eyes flow through the foreground and flow right straight back to the water and the rocks in the background, plus what I like is the wide view and you don't see that dark tree trunk in the upper right corner. Just love these types of images and have not done these in so many years and hope to do some this year.

[larkspur]

Like this?

[Dennis]

I think that this view is much much better, now how do you fell about the crop now Larkspur?

[larkspur]

I like it better cropped too.

[Dennis]

I like it better cropped too.

I thought that you would like the crop better, it really draws you eyes into the scenery. You seem to be having some fun again with the camera which is nice to see.

[Don B]

I also like the crop much better. You could also cloned out the white sky in the upper section. You have enough leaves around the image to use.

[asm140]

I agree, this works much better.

Andrew